Going under

Watch her drift beyond shore’s edge

Body half risen, half submerged

Observed by faithfuls on the bank

Robed white as if for rapture.

Watch preacher dunk her under

The cool, murky shallow & up

Into searing midday sunlight.

Watch sisters receive her with

A towel & embraces 

like a newborn damp & alive.

Watch her take to the road alone

At service end, returning

To her own sacred ground that 

Heals scars water alone cannot

Cleanse, that full immersion cannnot

                                                                  Undo.

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One thought on “Going under

  1. so great. So vivid 🙂

    On Sun, May 21, 2017 at 4:41 AM, Newgenerationverse wrote:

    > Newgenerationverse posted: “Watch her drift beyond shore’s edge Body half > risen, half submerged Observed by faithfuls on the bank Robed white as if > for rapture. Watch preacher dunk her under The cool, murky shallow & up > Into searing midday sunlight. Watch sisters receive” >

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